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0 posted 2004-06-05 09:48 AM


Flowers seek the sun
and though they never arrive,
growing is enough.







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1 posted 2004-06-05 09:52 AM


What do they say about imitation?  Hm.  Shall I give it a  whirl?  I can only imitate.  You two are the masters!
    
   "Flowers seek the sun
and though they never arrive,
growing is enough."
  
Perhaps, not!  I'll have to think about this for a few... Get right back!  

    Growth sought by sn's love
  heard in wind the inching hum
     spiking stocks all done

ok, I guess I'm not up to it, but it's the best I can do right now.

    

Martie
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2 posted 2004-06-05 10:41 AM


sunflowers bending
there tall faces see the dirt
beauty to behold

icebox
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3 posted 2004-06-05 10:48 AM




newly budded life

earth awoken from Winter

decorating dreams
*smile*

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-06-05 12:41 PM


"oh, it's enough to be on your way,
it's enough just to cover ground"
-James Taylor

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5 posted 2004-06-05 01:58 PM


Excellent write!

Eric

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6 posted 2004-06-05 04:18 PM


I like this very much, my friend... What a beautiful reminder to appreciate the journey... whether the destination is reached or not. *S*
iliana
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7 posted 2004-06-05 06:32 PM


Aren't you the wise one, today -- perfect!
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