Open Poetry #32 |
The Faith Of A Stone |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The faith of a stone... To taste a moment in the briefness of its expression. On a tongue that whispers in the language of forever. Yet the stone remains still. As moments fall in timeless rapture. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this was so profound, something about the wording has left me in deep thought...wonderful write! take care. amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sees all, feels all... tells nothing... there is magic in your pen! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
The Faith of a Stone... This is great. Excellent. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are rock on! Linda |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
There are many beliefs that attribute souls to what others consider inanimate natural articles such as stones. Definite food for thought, the faith of a Stone. I really, really like this. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eric~ I love the ponder of this piece~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Keeping this one to ponder later Eric! Well done! Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Eric Your words always speak volumes to me and are always so very much enjoyed. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
Profound truth and beauty whispered in a divine, poetic breeze... Wonderful write. Pure magic. I love you, Moca |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Being a rock collector from way back, I just loved these words. Fabulous ... hugs, Marti If you truly love Nature, you will find |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric The cold rock is waiting calling for circumference. This reign will give to glistening basalt the depth of dreams and the lines of time in trenches where centuries are marked, striations of groaning war, passion and lusting for knowledge, will listen. your beautiful words brought me back to something I wrote a while ago. I hope you don't mind me sharing part of it here. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There is such clarity in the emotions of your works. I truly appreciate the depth and substance of what you write. Beautiful thoughts here. TD |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well done, my friend . . . very well conceived and written. jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Bravo! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
As moments fall in timeless rapture. I am like the stone I hold my breath to taste the sweet gift of stillness .... that is You. I love you. Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome, Eric! |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sunshine said it perfectly! Your poetry suns itself! Sadie |
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