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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2004-06-04 02:02 PM


There is a time I remember from not so long ago
A time where you were my heart and soul
However due to circumstances that were my fault
I left both in my world and yours...a huge hole

I know you will never read this
Still though, I will put my feelings out on these pages of blue
I'm more sorry than you could ever know
My intention was never to hurt you

Though months and months have passed
And now it's turned into well over a year
Sometimes at night just before I fall asleep
I think of you, and allow a solitary tear

It's not so much the loss that hurts so much
More it is the fact I don't even know how you are
My pride won't allow me to write a letter or such
I can't call you...that would be going too far

So instead, I can only hope
That time has been a kinder friend than I
I want you to know I'm a changed person
Somehow you can hear it in the wind, when I let out a personal sigh

It's a sigh that's reserved for you, and all that we once shared
And though I'll never get a chance to say all of this
You know in your heart
I truly cared...

There are no explanations for my past actions
It's still a hurt I carry everyday
I'm not trying to make excuses for myself
I just was hurting in the most horrible of ways

I hope that you are happy
I'm sure you've moved on by now
And though I know the reasons we ended
Still I miss you....somehow


"When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter"

© Copyright 2004 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
1 posted 2004-06-04 02:29 PM


So much love in this one!  Really great poem.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


MGROVES
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2 posted 2004-06-04 02:54 PM


ah i really liked this


SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18
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nc
3 posted 2004-06-04 11:02 PM


Aimster:
Hey, Sorry your feeling sad. Is this about who I think this is? Because if it is then it was their fault not yours!! Take Care.
  Love,
  Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
4 posted 2004-06-04 11:37 PM


I can tell this really came from your heart, Amy.  Sometimes, it really helps just to get it out like you did here.  Take care....jo
passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-06-05 03:15 AM


sometimes it's best to just remember
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