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Open Poetry #32

If I had a hammer

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2004-06-08 01:56 PM

The blank before me
Hides the vast chaos beneath
Swirling stays unseen
So I curse under my breath
Come resolution
Fall not to untimely death
I can not rebuild
Arggh!
PRESS ANY KEY

Gloom

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-06-08 02:03 PM

GADS DO I KNOW THIS POEM....
AND I COULD HAVE WRITTEN IT TOO!

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2004-06-08 02:06 PM

How about an ak-47 and a good backdrop instead?
Hammers just aren't safe enough!

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-06-08 02:06 PM

Professor,
Good one, enjoyed.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-06-08 02:51 PM

To continue?

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-06-08 04:58 PM

I have to say, Professor, that I understand this all too well. Excellent, excellent piece!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

6 posted 2004-06-10 02:14 AM

well done

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2004-06-10 11:53 PM

Gack! A study in gloom itself, Gloom!

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Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

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Gaia

8 posted 2004-06-10 11:56 PM

oh no
just hit the esc key?

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

9 posted 2004-06-22 11:46 AM

LOL I keep the hammer far, far away.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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