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The Mental Sea
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The Mental Sea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Mental Sea I sail upon a mental sea A crew of ego serving me Polishing the rind and brass And paying mind the weather mass I let balloons into the breeze The same that stirs the trees and leaves Watch it rise and fall the sky To tell me of the coming lie And though I’ve sailed a goodly while I’ve yet to find my land or Isle A shore to plant my spirits light A place to stay my phantoms plight I seek no more the primal spoor Nor do I seek the evermore But seek a finish to my goal By sweeping cobwebs from my soul By cleaning up my passage steer And putting out the flames of fear |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
BRAVO  I loved this SyGood morning to ya!!! Big smiles and hugs |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I wonder if there is really a sea or is it just thoughts trapped in my mind making suggestions neet stuff sy..muy grande |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Beware that ego crew! It can sometimes get you into a whole lot of trouble! I know of an isle in the sky where you can plant your spirit's Light and wash away all sins and blight on its Godly shores. A shangri-la where fear dost disappear! Come! Take my wing and I will fly you there on heavenly breeze.  The day promises to be much brighter! Angel loves 'n kisses, EA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I let balloons into the breeze The same that stirs the trees and leaves Watch it rise and fall the sky To tell me of the coming lie ============================== You are the breeze that stirs the leaves... and you are the wisdom of the trees.  you are also me *winkie winkie*  lol   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful wonderful morning read Sy! Enjoy your Friday and have a great weekend. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent! Enjoyed. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
ALWAYS enjoy reading you Seymour...and this one adds to that enjoyment. jwesley |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I seek no more the primal spoor Nor do I seek the evermore But seek a finish to my goal By sweeping cobwebs from my soul YES! excellent write Sey. So good to read you this Friday morning! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes an excellant way to start the day |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That's our Sy...  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful writing as always, Seymour. I hope you and yours have a good weekend. Hugs, Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"I seek no more the primal spoor Nor do I seek the evermore But seek a finish to my goal By sweeping cobwebs from my soul By cleaning up my passage steer And putting out the flames of fear" That makes a great deal of sense to me, Seymour -- we all have our cobwebs to sweep -- I probably need an industrial sized cleaner -- lol ! ! ! Enjoyed....jo |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Got a chuckle 'bout the 'primal spoor'....  . . . Afraid to go in the attic now....  Enjoyed. CG |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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