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Just had to write it down
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Just had to write it down |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
The screen door opens: A helmet full of broken flowers purple, sweet now rests on the stair The screen door opens: A soggy towel rumpled green, bright soaks the rug The screen door opens: Another towel soaked and rumpled is dropped on the first Voices float through the window: Oh my gosh, is it a spider eeewww sisters' giggles The screen door opens: little daughter tells her dad everything |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is just too precious to let pass by. Enjoyed!! Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. Hans Christian Anderson |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep - precious is the word!! jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Copperbell~ You captured a very precious moment-in-time~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Glad you did write it down -- so cute! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
So sweet, just like little girls. I really enjoyed this -- SusanThe whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
thank you there are just those times when I can't keep something only in my minds eye |
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