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The Tides of Emotions
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The Tides of Emotions |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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When it rains, it pours from the highest clouds the smallest waves, even the biggest crowds tug and pull, behavior strings of the mind attached to the heart, as deep as you find It rolls, it ripples, not only inward but tows, so emotionally outward the brightest days, the greyest of moments storming within, these tides of our torments Just below the surface, life is a rage currently living, just another stage but deeper yet in the calm of the cold is the whisper we search in silence told We ride the crests, the tides of emotions to explore unknown of our own oceans "In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
"These tides of our torments". Great line. Feeling it all too well. Good to see you. Sandra |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
ctowen -- this was an excellent analogy, so very, very well written! It's poetry like this that is exemplary. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
gmta |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just below the surface, life is a rage currently living, just another stage but deeper yet in the calm of the cold is the whisper we search in silence told Ooh, I like this!! Library bound it is. Chris  Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
but deeper yet in the calm of the cold wow, amazing line amazing poem |
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