Open Poetry #32 |
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Time Stands Still |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light ![]() |
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ The sands of time soon cease to fall, When our loving hearts entwine, And the world simply disappears, As your essence blends with mine. Within the circle of your arms, I breathe the breath of you, Filling me with warmth and life, Until the morning dew. I sigh the sigh of sweet completion, With your loving and adore, You take me to that special place, Where time stands still once more. +*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (06-05-2004 06:05 PM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very romantic... and a nice rhyme scheme... regards sudhir |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is just beautiful, my friend... as I knew it must be with such a title. *S* Within the circle of your arms, I breathe the breath of you, Filling me with warmth and life, I want to be there... yes! *S* |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetEarthyOne~ *sighing* here~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
... loved the love in here... jwesley |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
pERfect rhyme here EA, well done, very well done... |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very peaceful write, thanks for sharing |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
this is one of those writes where you expect to turn the card over and see Hallmark...and for me...that is a compliment...it was truly lovely... |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
lovely thoughts while one consumes himself/herself in the world of material wants and needs |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Double sigh. ![]() |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Linda this was so sweetly romantic. ![]() "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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