Open Poetry #32 |
Intertwine |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
As branches darken birds congregate on the treelined sky, shattered hearts view the sunset, hidden stars realign, such is this world of paradox,as beauty and sorrow intertwine. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-03-2004 08:54 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yes, life is all about taking the bitter with the sweet. Fortunately, I have a sweet tooth and seek out life's candy! A wee, but powerful write! Full of impact without being wordy. As always, you cause me to ponder! ~ and that's a good thing! ~ Have a marvelous day, Poetessa Goddessa! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Well you got that right, Enjoyed |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Yes, Inky, They "interwine" The trick is to make them balance...not let one vine choke out the other.. enjoyed this very much...I needed to read this this morning, funny how when we search hard we find what we are looking for... ------ice ><> |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You have a powerful chi woman! Let it soar...let it soar! TD |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Ethereal captivating expression of the paradox.....
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love how you see the world |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“beauty and sorrow” is life so true. Wonderful write! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
very nice... paradoxical regards sudhir |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
sighing...you're on fire lately Michele, with wisdom and beauty in nature. keep em coming. Library. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you dear poets for stopping in and spending some time with me |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Always enjoy spending time with you, and will use any excuse at all to do so . . . and this is the BEST excuse I could find at the moment and still be somewhat "coy" about it... wonderful piece my friend... jwesley |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
a very nice unique perspective |
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