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Patience |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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Patience the mountains will be there on another day or another maybe they’ll be greener then the sky closer deeper blue trees returning after fire will be more full then more alive maybe we’ll be there then and it will be better than today |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
maybe we'll be there and it will be better then today... What glorious thoughts, what a beautifully mental picture you have painted...lovely |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
From the ashes.... comes the Phoenix. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes...it will be better than today. Well done poet sir. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed "maybe we’ll be there then and it will be better than today" It does take patience to wait for a better day...especially when they never seem to come. You set the mood with this one, a sort of resignation that I could feel. Lots of emotional impact.  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Full of hope! Loved it, Ratleader! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
maybe it will Ed...and maybe I will be lucky enough to enjoy it also... nice thoughts M |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Ed, as patience is not one of my virtues, and I've promised to practice it, this would be an excellent mantra for me. Thank you. click ~K~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Some things are definitely worth waiting for... But oh... how that wait aches! *S* I love the optimism you weave with the resignation... wonderful work! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Patience is a virtue that is not always that easy to come by! ~ But then, anything that is worth having is worth waiting for! ~ May your mountains grow green and may they be kissed by the bluest of skies! EA |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe...yes maybe |
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