Open Poetry #32 |
Three lines about a Small Thought |
Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Life is a cold war Every day a victory Peace in hope of time |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
YES Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah, life is truly a war, won by one small battle at a time and peace, although it seems so elusive, is really just beyond our grasp. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Agree!!! Hugs~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautifully said Martie The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Doesn't matter how long or short your verses are, Martie. Your sentiments are eloquent, and always heartfelt. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Eloquent indeed. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Martie -- small thought, no. B I G thought! And B I G *YES*. ....jo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
*smile* |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Three Lines About Martie When she says small thought, get ready for a big one: it's a relative thing. And about this.... Cold? Yes..............War? Half of one anyhow; but wars should have sides. Every day? Yes......Victory? What's that? Peace? Hope?........Maybe, in time. I sure hope so. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I could apply these three lines to the world, my family, my faith, and myself - and I haven't even mulled it over yet Very profound Martie. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Definitely, yep. Well said. Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Amen. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
well said Martie - Paul |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
But a not so small ideal. Truth distilled. Very cool write Martie... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nothing you ever write is small! Even tho' the word count may be! EA |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
And, Martie, I add my voice to your other replies! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Martie, If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Wonderfully tight writing. Great twist of words. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and time to hope in peace... Was not able to have computer access for the last few days, sweetie...just now catching up...but you knew I would! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Profound! In one word. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hope so..hug |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
HiSis~ A thoughtful little piece, for sure~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Peace. (love the new pic..) "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely, great articulation Martie, Hello and Good Morning, wishing you a great day! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey Sweetie...Like the new pic, AND the fact that you've passed 19,000 posts! |
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