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screaming amazing. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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you arent like all the rest you never have been but that's alright with me they don't see everything you are i love you for you i love that fact that you talk about sunsets and romantic comedies every word you've ever written down on paper screams amazing why can't you see what i see? a poet in his own writes you've paved the way for my heart to follow you and it will with it's guards down you might hurt me, but i'd give up my heart for you i'd give up myself for you because your worth it every little peice of you, is worth it. thank god for internet cafes! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
How did this poem ever go fifty slots down without a response!?! I like your wordplay especially in this, and the way you approach your subject at a tangent.... and this every word you've ever written down on paper screams amazing why can't you see what i see? Takes me to a place I've been with several people, including three in this group....so much talent but they don't see it in themselves. Should I name them? No, one's gone, one has a new name, and the third posts very rarely, though he tells me he reads fairly often without talking much....if they see this they'll know who they are....won't you, RSK!.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know how you feel...I remember |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
every word you've ever written down on paper screams amazing why can't you see what i see? -------------------- you've paved the way for my heart to follow you and it will with it's guards down you might hurt me, but i'd give up my heart for you i'd give up myself for you because your worth it This says as much about the writer as it does the recipient... and I'd say both are pretty amazing. *S* I like it very much... yes! *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful emotion in this wonderful poem! Very enjoyable read. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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