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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2004-05-31 07:03 PM

Twisting ankles to thighs

foetal

I press fingerprints upon my own evidence;

resigned body

insignificant shell

it feels like nothing

against stone laid in symmetry

I've seen your aura

and followed the maps

the air between us is numb

when I remember the lines

and forget to read between them.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-05-31 07:07 PM

W O W -- powerful writing.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-05-31 07:10 PM

WOW Gem.

Fantastic!

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-06-01 03:57 AM

always love you

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-06-01 07:30 AM

the air between us is numb

when I remember the lines

and forget to read between them.

like the punch in this ending;
hey , where's the blonde? lol
this is a nice look too;

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

5 posted 2004-06-01 09:23 AM

This is fantastic writing that I really enjoyed reading.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

6 posted 2004-06-01 02:06 PM

"I've seen your aura

and followed the maps

the air between us is numb

when I remember the lines

and forget to read between them"
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DAMN
this is good!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2004-06-01 03:10 PM

jesus gem, this one, my favourite of gem favourites

**Ah I just noticed the picture! brunettes..get me everytime

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

8 posted 2004-06-01 11:13 PM

"I press fingerprints upon my own evidence;

resigned body

insignificant shell

it feels like nothing

against stone laid in symmetry"

There are very few poets that I enjoy every time I read them. You are one...

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

9 posted 2004-06-01 11:36 PM

Mingling with straight lines and obscure curves..

love love love.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

10 posted 2004-06-04 07:44 AM

I am in complete agreement with Duncan and Meg.

lovie.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2004-06-04 07:52 AM

good one!!!!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

12 posted 2004-06-04 10:32 AM

"when I remember the lines
and forget to read between them."

That line tells it all. Great one!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

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