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Open Poetry #32

In The Bowl . . . . . . Senryu

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Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2004-06-02 07:17 PM

In The Bowl

All long my minnows
wander, hands in their pockets,
wondering what to do.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

1 posted 2004-06-02 07:46 PM

In a bowl, I would wonder too. Enjoyed this.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

2 posted 2004-06-02 08:06 PM

Now that is a sight. Hands in pockets.
HUmmmmmmmmm........
Good one
BonBon

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2004-06-02 09:38 PM

what a vision...you have made me smile!!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2004-06-03 03:11 PM

Oh... I love this! *S* I just don't know whether to grin at such an incredible image... or lament the limitations they must live with. *S* Excellent! *S*

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