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Dark Kisses
Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

0 posted 2004-06-01 11:48 PM


If I could only look into your eyes one more time
And tell you what you mean to me
How I loved you like no other
If only my heart could be seen

I would give anything to hold your hand in mine
To feel the gentleness of your touch
Wrapping myself in your arms at night
ANd how it meant so much

If only one more chance
One more chance to show you
My love was unconditional
My actions were always true

I pray to the gods each night
Hoping you hear my call
Listen to your inner thoughts
Please listen before I fall

The only message I send to you
Is that I love you just the same
And if you ever feel lonely
Just call out my name

For you won my heart long ago
And you carry it every day
This you will soon realize
And find your home my way

A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness.

© Copyright 2004 Mags - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-06-01 11:59 PM


Such a sad/sweet writing -- good job.  
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-06-02 01:58 AM


bittersweetly done
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
3 posted 2004-06-02 03:43 PM


Very Sweet.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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