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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-06-01 11:23 AM

Plunging

All alone I stand
emptiness a something feel
what's false is false
and true is real
so lick the envelope
these words to seal.

Once is not enough I guess
more than I can ask, so
toss the dice, there is no win
just sorrows, future's task
and I, in mourning's mask.

Time, it comes, its deed to fill
the need of which I have no will.

Behind, I sit, this masquerade
of who of you, and I still fraught
the need of none, no longer aide
in silent screams my words in fought
expect not much, sit I, in thought.

I stretch my reach and still its bare
no one, nothing, airless air
just words, more words,
a nonsense write
fulfilling time, trapped in this plight.

Time, it comes, its deed a must
the feel of which, a knife in thrust.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2004-06-01 11:32 AM

I stretch my reach and still its bare
no one, nothing, airless air

Even reading this leaves me with a painful ache and emptiness. You expressed it so well, though...

I hate when you can look ahead at time
and see that, for awhile,
it honestly offers nothing but grief.
I wish it was different for you.

Just hang on...

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-06-01 11:33 AM

M-girl -- you okay? Wow, sounds like a rough morning -- rough weekend. Good write, though. Hang in there. Hugs to you............jo

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-06-01 11:34 AM

Maureen, I am reaching out for you. Hold on, you will get through this very difficult time. In spite of all your pain, fear and frustration, you still manage to write with a master's touch.

Sending you loving Light and comforting hugs,
Linda

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-06-01 11:40 AM

Maureen,
Sad, but well written.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-06-01 11:43 AM

ouch...that hurts

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