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Open Poetry #32

We Could Mingle [Waka]

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

0 posted 2004-06-01 08:04 AM

We could mingle
as do my tears and fresh dew
on blades of spring grass-
the moon gleams full in each drop
till consumed by the dawn sun.

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-06-01 08:09 AM

consumed by the heat
where passion resides
upon every sunray
that dances
the summer's memory
across mingled droplets
of dew soaked moments
and moistened sighs

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-06-01 10:51 AM

We could mingle
as do my tears and fresh dew
on blades of spring grass-
the moon gleams full in each drop
till consumed by the dawn sun.

the sun of dawn
melts the night's tears
as the grass laments,
glistening solftly
into silence

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-06-01 10:53 AM

choshi
That about says it all.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-06-01 10:53 AM

How very beautiful...that's how it is to mingle the happiest with the saddest and how you handle the mix.
TD

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

5 posted 2004-06-01 11:01 AM

choshi -- the truth of a good life. Beautiful, beautiful.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2004-06-01 11:06 AM

"We could mingle
as do my tears and fresh dew
on blades of spring grass-
the moon gleams full in each drop
till consumed by the dawn sun."

~ Your exquisite poem beared repeating!!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-06-01 11:49 AM

whew...beautiful

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