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Phantoms and Ghosts ( for a friend who will know)
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Phantoms and Ghosts ( for a friend who will know) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Phantoms and ghosts lie in wait. God only knows their intent. Beneath a veil of secrecy and disguise lurks a volcano waiting to vent. Beware the ides of March they say, but even more so, the eyes of disguise. All is not what it seems. But what it is, may take a lifetime to discover. Do you have that much time to give? Some things are better left buried deep within the bowels of the earth. This may be one of those things. Phantoms and ghosts lie in wait. God only knows their intent. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
really liked this  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, some things are better left alone |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
McGroves, thanks. Dixie, yes...especially when good intent is doubtful, and honesty is in short suppply. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kacy -- maybe it's a coincidence -- are you tracking my net surfing.....lol  ....jo |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Heartfelt write Kacy....You mix the heart and your intelligence beautifully.....~P |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Iliana, visiting volcanoes, heh? LOL choishi,  thanking you for reading and that kindly generous reply |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
nodding yes to this  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like your friend would be wise to heed your warning! Tingled my spine and shivered me timbers! EA |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes yes dont look under rocks..... |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent write! Eric |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Oh great...I'll be sleeping with the lights on tonight!!! Intriging write Kacy. I dunno, I can think of a ghost or two I wouldn't mind revisiting.  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I'd laugh at your reply Duncan if it weren't true that I have a ghost I'd like to revisit. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Maybe we could get a two-fer one ticket to Ghostville????  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
ROTFL! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good One! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
My problem I don't realize it was better left alone until its too late.. Very Good writing Kacy. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Lee, thanks! Susan? Since you only live once, I think a second visitation is worth the risk. |
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