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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10

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Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-05-30 04:19 AM

Waves crash upon my feet as
I walk along the vast beach
the sand between my toes

The image of you still
remains the same how calm
you are how you remain the
same no matter how far

The outstretch of time
being there for me before
I knew you. The special
gift but curse we both share

People care but if they only
knew what we both been through

The dolphins cry, the salty
sea air tickles are sences of
the peace and serinity we have
when we are together.

© Copyright 2004 Julie O'Neill - All Rights Reserved

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
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1 posted 2004-05-30 04:27 AM

Julie, this is beautiful. The poem
as well as the picture.

Hugs,

Foxyoasis
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Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2004-05-30 05:09 AM

Thank you

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

3 posted 2004-05-30 07:13 AM

this is so beautiful it gives my heart such joy. love the beach, wish i was there

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-05-30 07:42 AM

Foxyoasis
Enjoyed the look and the read.

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2004-05-30 12:51 PM

glad I didn't miss this one

beautiful

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-06-02 12:13 PM

Very lovely!

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-06-02 03:44 PM

I especially loved the picture!!

Nice.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

8 posted 2004-06-07 08:29 PM

Hello Julie

Your words complimented the picture beautifully.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

9 posted 2004-06-07 08:51 PM

Simply lovely write. hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

10 posted 2004-06-07 08:53 PM

Think GarysGirl said it perfectly, my friend...lovely...

jwesley

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