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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2004-05-29 12:11 PM



Vanish

I need
to know how to
forget the touch of your love
and the whispered promises.
How do I erase the imprint you left
on my now broken tattered heart?
Tell me how I can make
these memories
vanish.



"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."    -Friedrich Nietzsche

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1 posted 2004-05-29 12:29 PM


I understand this...don't have an answer for you, but yeah I know it hurts
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2 posted 2004-05-29 12:37 PM


Aw, dear poetess. They do not vanish I am afraid. For me they faded over time.
Lovely write. hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

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3 posted 2004-05-29 12:54 PM


i too know the pain of this. sorry no answere here


ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2004-05-29 01:16 PM


Sweet Petals...
There is this aspect, and also the more powerful aspect that remains.  Without doubt, it is the stronger of the two. A treasure of a write, and a treasure.
Hugs,
TD

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5 posted 2004-05-29 01:30 PM


Beutifully written.  

  Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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6 posted 2004-05-29 09:36 PM


Thank you all for responding Rest assured this is not in anyway about my current relationship My hubby and I are wonderful and happy.  

I have no idea why this came to me, it just did one morning.

Thanks again for stopping in

"There is always some madness in love. But there is also always some reason in madness."    -Friedrich Nietzsche

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