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Drowning from your love.
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Drowning from your love. |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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is it ok if i call you mine? i want to so bad your love is pumping through my heart like water it feels like i'm drowning from love i'm in over my head and your all thats saving me is it ok if i say i love you? because i do you'll never need me the way i'll always need you your words are like my oxygen it's keeping me alive is it alright if i hold you? the way i wish you would hold me but that's not that way things work that's not how life is you don't always get what you want and i want you.. is it ok if i call you mine? because every second that i'm not with you my heart fills with water i'm drowning from your love.. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
oh this is beautiful  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I can feel the ache of want in this. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
It does feel like this and you said it so well. The anaologies were very meaningful!  ........jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I guess it's nice to be drowning now and then |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
That sucks. Not the poem. the feeling. I hate feeling that way. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very nice writing..enjoyed... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
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