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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-05-29 09:44 AM



Waiting Game

The thought processes go into overtime
awake even in my sleep
a rhythm to my sighing
as I wonder about today and the tomorrow
that looms, my body shuddering,
waiting for the unheard of.

I am stationary in thought,
neither here nor there,
a phone call away, showered with remember,
its silence deafening.


I act the confident, in expectation of,
assured of only one thing,
but innocent in its limitations
as I squander these thoughts,
looking for the final song, the one that will
sing my heart to peace.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2004-05-29 11:04 AM


i know this kind of wait, no game at all..but you know that
always here watching you, and wishing quietly for all the strength you can hold

Juju
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2 posted 2004-05-29 12:02 PM


Sigh.......

good poem. I too feal that way in occassion

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4 posted 2004-05-29 12:33 PM


I relate so well to your writings M.
It's nice to understand.

HopeS
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5 posted 2004-05-29 12:43 PM


" thought processes go into overtime" this is me too Maureen , my mind never rests , I even worry about things that might never happen

Hope

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