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urdarbrunn
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since 2004-04-09
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0 posted 2004-05-28 02:18 PM



Thunder clashes
Bright Eye flashes
What name have you today?

Dismal thoughts
Morbid plots
What game is it you play?

Maidens flying
Ravens crying
Where do you throw your spear?

Broken shield
Bloody field
To whom do you bring fear?

Burning eyes
Indignant surprise
Why do you betray?

For personal gain?
For bitter disdain?
No one can really say.

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Susan
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-05-28 02:44 PM


Thoughtful questions here, a write that makes one consider.  Welcome to the forum.  

Smiles -- Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2004-05-28 02:47 PM


Hey!  Welcome to Pip!!

Very nice first post..looking forward to more..

Susan

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Nightshade
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just out of reach
3 posted 2004-05-28 02:53 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Enjoyed your first post.
Chris

urdarbrunn
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4 posted 2004-05-28 03:00 PM


Thank you all for the welcome.

I've been enjoying reading the poetry from this forum a month now, and figured I probably should share.

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2004-05-28 03:04 PM


By all means, WELCOME TO PiP~

Intriguing entry ... enjoy your reading and posting~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
6 posted 2004-05-28 03:12 PM


welcome to the passion
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2004-05-28 03:14 PM


That is some good figuring on your part!
Welcome to Passions!


Enchantress
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Canada eh.
8 posted 2004-05-28 03:23 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
I very much enjoyed your first post.
Looking forward to seeing more of your work.


~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Michelle_loves_Mike
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9 posted 2004-05-28 04:04 PM


Dig it, Welcome To PIP Talk,,,you have a differnent style indeed,,,,,give us more to sample,,,,,

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2004-05-28 04:05 PM


Welcome...interesting first post.
Glad to have you join us.
ThisDiamond

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2004-05-28 04:16 PM


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Juju
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In your dreams
12 posted 2004-05-29 12:22 PM


Much like(:
passing shadows
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displaced
13 posted 2004-05-29 12:54 PM


neat write!

Welcome!

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