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Serenity |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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Dreaming is an illusion, Mind set in total confusion. I like it I'm not gonna crack, So take your life get off my back, Give me SERENITY. Apathy all around, Listen hear its sound. I like it I'm not gonna crack, So take your life get off my back, I need SERENITY. Walk on by with no respect, Criminal minded is how you detect. I like it I'm not gonna crack, So take your life get off my back, And give me SERENITY. Psychosis of the mind, Look inside to find. I like it I'm not gonna crack, Take your life get off my back. Cause I need SERENITY... Give me SERENITY... Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
understood |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Poem is outstanding (I know I need Serenity from time to time). But ah...that picture...lol...little creepy to me...but I think that is what you were going for? "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good one Kyle... but we must do something with that picture. LOL.  Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I agree with my sister Enchantress....your pic scares me!  lol.Maybe if you get the "serenity" you write so well about ... your pic will soften too. Enjoyed! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What you accomplished in this was a complete contrast of serenity with the opposite -- outstanding! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
See I'm not the only one who questions that PIC!!!! Great poem kiddo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well written |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
yer scaring me a little. laughing here, great poem, m'friend and psssst...guess what? I need serenity too. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great write. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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