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Snowflake From Hell
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-05-28 12:23 PM


Dreaming is an illusion,
Mind set in total confusion.
I like it I'm not gonna crack,
So take your life get off my back,
Give me SERENITY.
Apathy all around,
Listen hear its sound.
I like it I'm not gonna crack,
So take your life get off my back,
I need SERENITY.
Walk on by with no respect,
Criminal minded is how you detect.
I like it I'm not gonna crack,
So take your life get off my back,
And give me SERENITY.
Psychosis of the mind,
Look inside to find.
I like it I'm not gonna crack,
Take your life get off my back.
Cause I need SERENITY...
Give me SERENITY...

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-05-28 12:28 PM


understood
Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
2 posted 2004-05-28 12:46 PM


Poem is outstanding (I know I need Serenity from time to time).

But ah...that picture...lol...little creepy to me...but I think that is what you were going for?

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-05-28 01:45 PM


Good one Kyle...
but we must do something with that picture. LOL.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Nightshade
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just out of reach
4 posted 2004-05-28 02:40 PM


I agree with my sister Enchantress....your pic scares me!   lol.
Maybe if you get the "serenity" you write so well about ... your pic will soften too.
Enjoyed! hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
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USA
5 posted 2004-05-29 07:49 PM


What you accomplished in this was a complete contrast of serenity with the opposite -- outstanding!
Paula Finn
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missouri
6 posted 2004-06-08 12:17 PM


See I'm not the only one who questions that PIC!!!! Great poem kiddo
LeeJ
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7 posted 2004-06-08 12:46 PM


well written
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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8 posted 2004-06-08 02:00 PM


yer scaring me a little.

laughing here,

great poem, m'friend and psssst...guess what?

I need serenity too.

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
9 posted 2004-06-08 02:57 PM


Great write.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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