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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-05-27 08:08 PM

Natural Beauty

I was impressed by the way her
white cotton dress pressed hard
against the two bumps on her chest.
And her black silky hair and her
coppertone skin gracing her body
soft and sensually thin.
To say she enticed me would not
fairly this story tell, for she
was only being herself
and her natural beauty
was serving her well.

JamesLee
May28
2004

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2004-05-27 08:09 PM

James,
Bumps?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-05-27 08:16 PM

I know Larry...it was either bumps or "succulent breasts" and I didn't want to overly sensualize these thoughts...for her beauty is so natural...she doesn't have to dress up or ever try to be gorgeous, she is one of the most beautiful women in the word...James

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2004-05-27 09:16 PM

James,

Well ya' know I certainly got the picture and enjoyed it too. But I made the edit in my mind. LOL You do know I always enjoy your writing so thought you wouldn't mind the prod.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-05-27 09:18 PM

She sounds beautiful James.

Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-28 03:52 AM

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2004-05-28 05:10 AM

here is some

LOL.....

~Love and hugs
~ARh

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

7 posted 2004-05-28 10:09 AM

"white cotton dress pressed hard
against the two bumps on her chest"

how about:

"White cotton dress pressed hard
against the swell of that which declared her woman"

Okay...I will shut up now. LMAO

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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