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Open Poetry #32

sin samba beguile

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-05-27 08:35 AM

sun skin shinola
got the glisten going gawdy
jaunty jiggle justification
mean lean in the jeans

walkin? ain't the word for that

smug muggin' with wicky winks
fingernail foo-foo fancy
false fragile catch my fallin'
and belly rub tune timing

dancin? ain't the word for that

voodoo schoolin' up tooled
treacher wench wrenchery
tightenin' the fightin' trys
butterfly sighs tattoo on thigh

makin love? ain't the word for that
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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-05-27 08:37 AM

One step higher...
farther,
longer...

yep.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-05-27 09:09 AM

Lot of folks doin that sin samba Dark.
Good stuff here..
love the alliterations.
~mornin' hugs~

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2004-05-27 10:40 AM

deliously wicked

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2004-05-27 11:48 AM

gawd you are sooooooooo good m'friend.
I miss your words muchly!! *grinz*

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-27 12:47 PM

just perfect!

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2004-05-27 01:34 PM

Very interesting wording. Good one!

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2004-05-27 03:29 PM

Nice! Gotta love it when a writer is bold enough to lean out over the void to for an idea...

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2004-05-27 04:15 PM

alliteration alert!!!

WOO HOO... ya know Im diggin your jive jumping and your word wiggles. LOL
very cool write groovy guy.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2004-05-28 08:38 AM

youz guyz are too much cool
thanx for the eyez and nodz
most humblez Dark

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