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Love Stricken
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Love Stricken |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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I guess i wouldn't recognize it (anymore)if it didn't run in the line parallel to its shadow, deep in the marrow where the red and the black interwine; even the saintly rose was birthed from roots that were encased once in the origin of grit and grime; immaculate conception is only for a few chosen ones, or is it? it comes through a bullet's depth, piercing an already wounded heart that opened prematurely to supposed foolproof signs that somehow leaked in through faith's shaky window, would i know it anymore if it didnt both shower me with soft petals, then douse me in falling rocks and twigs, look how the green towers stand unphased as wooden soldiers, now watch the rain upon their shoulders, first in a cloak of kindness, do they ever wear the green with such jubilation as when they are love stricken with heaven's rain? [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (05-27-2004 09:44 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...wow |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"do they ever wear the green with such jubilation as when they are love stricken with heaven's rain?" Yes...WOW!!! Love this Michele...LOL...but then again.. I love everything you write.  Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
even the saintly rose was birthed from roots that were encased once in the origin of grit and grime; Yes. This is great. Enjoyed. Smiles -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Absolutely love this Inked Maree. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful write indeed. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Interesting |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
This is so beautiful...I'm in awe... ~Live and Laugh~ The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for stopping in |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are one poetically-gifted poetessa!!! Your brilliance shines through your orchestration of the Goddess language!   EA |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A fine write indeed, m'friend... Regards Sudhir |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
love sliced and diced, blended, shaken and stirred, folded, spindled and mutilated and offered to ease the pain of a simple lonely? enjoyed this ms |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
more than fantastic, youve wowed me! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wonderfully written |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
tu rockez vous |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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