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Old Sol
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Old Sol |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Old Sol I thought you might not come today sitting there behind that dark, gray cloud, but here you are, blinding the sight of one eye, painting rings of light that mesmerize, obscure my view. Odd, how light can hinder one’s view with its great intensity, being incomprehensible to the mere humanness of one’s eye. Must be the “forest for the trees” syndrome. ©April 17, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Grin... Ah yes...and some rose colored glasses sometimes help. Neat write. TD |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
yep, and sooner or later in all those trees, one stands out.... kool piece.. jwesley |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I liked it. This one made me stop and think...and that is sometimes too rare for me! Thanks~ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ah...must be |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
liked this one. cool |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Must be, Virginia...must be.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
big smiles...talented concept, very much enjoyed. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really enjoyed this piece, and there are several here that I could relate it to!  |
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