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The Missing Of.........
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The Missing Of......... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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 The missing of the touch of your hands gently upon my skin tenderly touching leaving the feel of your love for me The missing of your touch of your eyes as they look upon me touching me with your gaze of love The missing of the touch from your voice speaking softly in my ear as you whisper sweet words of love The missing of your touch of your lips as you press them eagerly to mine in a luscious lingering kiss of love The missing of your touch as we are apart we feel ache of lonely but always we feel our love within our hearts the touch of......our Love |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel, I think you need a great big hug ~ from your beloved Gary. But since he is not there at this moment, will a distant healing hug from me help a little bit? This literally brought tears to my eyes. To be away from each other's loving touch must be very difficult for the both of you. Love will conquer all!  Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
speaks tenderly to the ache of longing very nice use of wordplay throughout |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl,  Lovely |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in a luscious lingering kiss of love ============================= gotta love the lingering lips and the alliterations.  lovely heartfelt write poetess Ethel.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh Ethel...You are really missing Gary badly. Hope you get together real soon. Love ya pretty lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Ethel, now you went and did it...made me cry but tears of happiness...this was just beautiful! wow take care amy "When life gives you sorrow, may you experience the spirit of laughter" |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Very emotional write. I hope the one you love gets home to you soon. Tara |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh...this is a romantic one...James |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
That's for sure, it's so beautiful! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so lovely... so tender... I feel this yearning to the very core of me. *S* Excellent write! *S* |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ethel, I feel the longing in your words. Soon...I hope the two of you will be together. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
SOOOO nice! Enjoyed. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"The missing of your touch of your lips as you press them eagerly to mine in a luscious lingering kiss of love" Some great images in this Ethel...  |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Sometimes the world is made of missing -- something I know all too well. I hope yours has a happy ending. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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