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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
When I hold a grain of sand in my hand I cry rain the sky bland with fakeness Fanning her face I erase this space hard heating killer hearts of a card that rend others don't understand the elastic band of my blood beating through my brain seeing insane irritation at the world's iodine ingrained inside my wound remained the pain soon peeling me away blind shots for her poor me pour me out to bleed these tears flow and only I know the years when fear turns to yeast Spilling obsession smoothly over soft eyes a soft site sublime hands move divine light this moment gone pierced by an ivory tooth lands collide through rainbow realms and I dream of dragons dividing sun sets by moonlight in their iris's cream colored canvas's paralell with truth expanding Godspeed to revolve haste I chase myself inside a thought Watching me run Outside of what I am |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this sounds painful  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ByronLandry~ 'I chase myself inside a thought' I find this poetic line very-much to my liking~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
like Marge I love these words among oters: I chase myself inside a thought Watching me run Outside of what I am great work M |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
^_^ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I have to agree with Marge and nakdthoughts, I really like those lines as well. Tara  |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Such a creative write, I can't pick a line that I like the best. I like it all! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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