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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-05-26 12:24 PM


Think one should re-examine a concept here
remove the veil from the lot of fear;
fashionable statements strike inside downtown cores
new weaves get discovered since we applied mores.

There is so much misery inflicted around the world
so much annihilation for the creation of a word
violence will soon beset regions of social turmoil
and in the game of defense a sword outdoes a foil?

a conflict soon becomes a source of objection
points on peace establishment raises contention;
funny that the world still goes round and round
everyone thinks their views are still safe and sound...


to every action there is an opposite reaction
to every objection there's a point of reflection
turmoil rises from the heat of the moment
fencer's foil rises from the seat that foments.




© Copyright 2004 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-05-26 12:36 PM


Thought provoking, interesting observations.  Enjoyed the read.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-05-26 03:08 AM


always love your outlook and insight
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-05-26 10:57 AM


a conflict soon becomes a source of objection
points on establishment of peace raises contention;
funny that the world still goes round and round
everyone thinks their views are still safe and sound...


the most meaningful of your verses, Martin

M

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
4 posted 2004-05-26 11:55 PM


Hey Maureen

had to reword a line there to get rid of unwanted prepositions... you hit the jackpot

Martin


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