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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Think one should re-examine a concept here remove the veil from the lot of fear; fashionable statements strike inside downtown cores new weaves get discovered since we applied mores. There is so much misery inflicted around the world so much annihilation for the creation of a word violence will soon beset regions of social turmoil and in the game of defense a sword outdoes a foil? a conflict soon becomes a source of objection points on peace establishment raises contention; funny that the world still goes round and round everyone thinks their views are still safe and sound... to every action there is an opposite reaction to every objection there's a point of reflection turmoil rises from the heat of the moment fencer's foil rises from the seat that foments. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thought provoking, interesting observations. Enjoyed the read. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love your outlook and insight |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a conflict soon becomes a source of objection points on establishment of peace raises contention; funny that the world still goes round and round everyone thinks their views are still safe and sound... the most meaningful of your verses, Martin M |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hey Maureen had to reword a line there to get rid of unwanted prepositions... you hit the jackpot Martin |
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