Open Poetry #32 |
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Bridges |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL ![]() |
Bridges I identify bridges in their suspension On erected pilings driven Laying no stock on sandy bottom Only sweat and blood of bedrock In heavy breathing to death Do bridges span our lives I see bridges in constellations’ foolish disparity From star to point and North On sterile compass headings Frozen onward inky blackness To bridge thought with imaginings I follow bridges raftered leading And mock the crossing’s distance With my footsteps lost on current swells Anchored resolutely in my understanding of minds, lives apart, bridged together Robert |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Robert, Incredible imagery and depth! A couple of months ago I read an article in Discover about the plans for new ultra modern bridges to be erected spanning several miles, breaking the world records by far. If you like science and happen to be fascinated with bridges, the article was enlightening. (I had thought I might write one about the article, but haven't gotten to it.) I was amazed at your transition between the first stanza and the second where you spoke about the bridging of stars, compass, etc. Very smooth. Enjoyed. Sadelite |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RobertB~ 'Anchored resolutely in my understanding of minds, lives apart, bridged together' There is such depth to you~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Very moving! Excellent imagery! Thanks so much for sharing this! ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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