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timothysangel1973
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0 posted 2004-05-25 08:04 AM


5 Months & Counting

I feel the quick and gentle moves
deep inside of me

Turning, tossing, moving 'round
active as can be

Late at night is usually best
to feel the move inside

It's then that I'm still enough
and little one doesn't have to hide

Today, oh how we've been waiting,
and I hope the secret comes out

Just what is this baby inside...
Moving all about

Will it be a girl or boy,
in a few hours we hope to see

Will it be a Baby Zac,
or Baby Timberlee?

It's funny now that I can't remember the pain that it took to find happiness...

© Copyright 2004 Tima Chavis Cooke - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-25 09:09 AM


Happy, healthy, with ten fingers and toes...
that's what I pray for...

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2 posted 2004-05-25 09:13 AM


timothysangel1973
Congrats and I wish you well.

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3 posted 2004-05-25 09:15 AM



With your descriptive and emotive writing, you were able to bring me back to those glowing times when my daughters were within mine own womb!

Sending lots of love and protective Light for you and your unborn child!

Lovely poem! Lovely you!
EA

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4 posted 2004-05-25 12:25 PM


congrats Tima...wow!

just wow...

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5 posted 2004-05-25 12:28 PM


Ah Tima, you made me remember what it 'feels' like...
to carry a child...awesome.
Please let us know when you find out okay?
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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