Open Poetry #32 |
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merging with Dali |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia ![]() |
in a Daliesque moment i slipped through the cracks into another dimension... one without tension or apprehension surreality held me long enough to escape the black boxed day that sat too squarely upon the calendar i seek solitude a welcome entrapment within the corner yet forever flirting with radiant circles of light I sense the core the heat of life out there somewhere just beyond my fingertips floating in blue |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling wide--- I've done this once or twice. It's so awesome I wish I could do it at will. Y'got me grinning at this ungodly hour, Kacy. hmmm... "ah, sleep, perchance to dream" ![]() |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
The walls bleed into the floor and I remember to forget everything I am in these perfect little moments Fading into a Dali landscape melting time and worry I ask little of a life that offers less but perchance to dream An early one from the archives. Love dali, adore his work and these words youve written |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I knew this would be good! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
id like to get lost in this too for a while |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
thanking you, oh serene one, for sharing this dimension, especially at an ungodly hour ![]() Raph, your write is a perfect Dali moment, thanks for sharing that one, I'll keep it safe in my library now Dixie, glad you enjoyed the trip goddess, it usually happens long after midnight for me, with a glass of wine and space to unwind |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Dali is a warm tongue on which the human soul may sit comfortably, but it is not in the nature of the soul to sit still for long. |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
icebox, what an interesting reply! love that visual..me...sitting atop a warm tongue hehehe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
yet forever flirting with radiant circles of light ========================= flirt on groovy girl!!!! Welcome back Kacy...missed ya round here. ![]() I love you more the further I go ... |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hey, thanks for the welcome back JM and as a moth, you do understand the light |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Midnitesun, Your title stuck me as I have saw a lot of Dali's work in a private collection in Cleveland years ago. His work came to life so well that I still visualize much of it. Your poem is excellent! I wrote one describing his 1932 painting, Eggs on the Plate Without the Plate. Here's my poem if your interested. /pip/Forum88/HTML/000293.html |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kacy -- so good to read you again -- sounds like you have mind-melded! ![]() PS-great poem! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You merge with Dali very beautifully, dear Kacy! Outstanding write. And I loved also the poems by Raphael and by Sadelite, both excellent. Love, Margherita |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sadie, Iliana, Margherita THANKS, ladies, for visiting this Dali moment. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You slip well, Kacy... |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh wow! Thanks for taking me on the trip with you. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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