Open Poetry #32 |
Whispering Winds |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Whisper the winds through budding trees calling the birds and buzzing bees. Letting the world become abloom as kites and kids soar lightly and zoom Swaying the reeds at water's edge beyond the rocks of craggy ledge. Lost in the move of waters dance wishing a lover, suitor perchance. Lost to the moment of newborn spring where eagles soar and angels sing. Where imagined ships sail on the blue in red and gold and greenish hue. Listen children, to all you hear upon this day of warm this year. Dance the meadow of clover green of green and yellow ... purple sheen. For now a zephyr whispers so soft and stirs the hay of brown barn’s loft. As wheat in the fields grow lazily and children roam young, wild and free. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wow, once again, I meet beauty here in your verses. Those whispers are beautifully shared. Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Barry, what a beautiful picture that you painted before my eyes. Just beautiful, with all the colors..... Hugs, Ethel |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Beautifully written! ~K~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Barry...this is so lyrical! Love the images and use of color. Beautiful...absolutely exquisite. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, A delight to read and enjoy. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you've painted a picture in my mind... beautiful I love it when you rhyme! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry....There is something about the wind that brightens my mood...feeling it here as well as in your poem. A wonderful read this morning, dear man...thank you. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Thanks for this one, Barry. Although it is warm and sunny here, I am stuck inside my house with some virus or something. Your beautiful verse brought a touch of spring indoors for me today. Wonderful work! Patricia |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Were it that innocent in all necks of every wood... oh, and Magnus? Somewhere in Time...a personal |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
For now a zephyr whispers so soft and stirs the hay of brown barn’s loft. As wheat in the fields grow lazily and children roam young, wild and free. This takes me back to childhood playing in the wheat fields under the endless summer sky and jumping from the hay loft. Mmmmm, what a lovely, happy write. Susan |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
soft breeze of spring blowing....lovley canvas in which you paint....good to see you here! ~~**~~ |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I know it sounds cliche, but this is truly a breath of fresh air! Loved this picture you painted, and the way you made your words dance and twirl~ *applause* Barry~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Magnus, Thanks for this beauty. It lends itself to a happy day. Sadelite |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Must agree with all the above! Beautiful imagery in this excellent poem! JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Beautiful, as always...hey Magnus, I have a girlfriend who lives in SC...actually Beauford..she works in Hilton Head. She says its very lovely and I'm supposed to come down for a visit, she's really getting frustrated with me for not doing so. Anyway, you have such mild weather there all year round. How lucky you are! Hugs Lee J. |
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