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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-05-22 08:00 PM



Bunny Boy

he pays no mind
to weathered woes
to cloud’s in tow
of labor saving ‘vices

the ones that threat
to circumvent
a woman’s plan
of some productive plane

he frolics here and there
around the square
of green, green lawn
a growing
filled with joy
and pleasant ploy,
in hopping madness
playing

a black and white
long-eared sprite
of hare-y fine
appealing

©May 22, 2004
Pullin’ Weeds

I’m fine when I’m down
I’m fine when I’m up,
as for gettin’ from one
t’the other,
I’m no spring pup!

©May 22, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
1 posted 2004-05-22 09:35 PM


I needed to read a bit of cheer.  Thanks for the smile.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Ratleader
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Member Rara Avis
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass
2 posted 2004-05-23 10:25 AM


Ya caught me red-handed -- that's my spirit, hoppin' around!

Love that line about the chores, I'm dodgin' 'em as we speak!

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iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
3 posted 2004-05-23 12:28 PM


VAS -- these two pieces were wonderful!  Happy Sunday!   ....jo
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-05-23 01:36 PM


cute ones


Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

5 posted 2004-05-23 03:14 PM


Nice!!

Eric

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