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zenny
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0 posted 2004-05-21 09:34 AM


As lovers begged to freeze the time
on moments when there love's sublime
I knew a man with lack of trust
who attained to fill ones eyes with dust

On moments when you expected least
this lovely man became a beast
Deserting me, his own blood and flesh
addicted to booze, he's spending all cash

So now I reseign where time doesn't run
I live in the shadows, but do miss the sun
The darkness is growing, I'm losing all hope
if only he could not reach to that dope

But that's just a wish to never come true
'cause he can't let go of that evil brew
I do ask the sun to shine upon me
to give me the courage to look out and see
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I really feel like i'm crashing here atm... again my dad's missing (and probably spending all cash on alcohol), today's the first day only but the stress is driving me insane.  And this is the time i'm supposed to study for my exams which are next week!  Please keep us in your thoughts so this soon may be solved!

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-05-21 10:30 AM


Kelly, just keep your mind on your own goals, and your tests will all be successful.  One thing we cannot control is another's addiction to self-destruction.

I will keep you in my thoughts and prayers.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2004-05-21 10:37 AM


zenny
Agree with Sunshine, enjoyed the read.

zenny
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3 posted 2004-05-21 12:53 PM


thx sunshine, and seymour.. i'm trying, very hard to focus at times like these though :/
iliana
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4 posted 2004-05-23 02:39 AM


zenny -- you will be in my thoughts.   ...jo
zenny
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5 posted 2004-05-23 06:50 AM


thx iliana

day 3 is starting, he's over 50hours missing now.

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