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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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truths lay dying in the grass victims of the coiled tongue of serpentine semantics |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very deep |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Good to see new work from you |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
1 word: "wow" very nice write! zenny |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
victims of the coiled tongue - I like that, very true |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a powerful depiction of something that happens all too often! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
"serpentine semantics" yes, youve got this worded in such a way that i cant find a way to comment on it! in awe maybe? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I really like this and its imagry. Excellent. Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent, Raph! Earth's crammed with heaven, and every common bush afire with God, but only he who sees takes off his shoes. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Superb imagery Bello, it's so great to see your words here.  Mxx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Usually, tho ya know I love the poet in you I shy away from some of your stuff cause you can be very, very deep sometimes and I just get confused which is easy enough for me to do.  You know me, Southern Belle....so Im usually into that love, pain, scar my heart burn my soul kinna stuff...With all that being said...I really liked this one!! |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yup |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ooooh Raph.. nice one. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love it when you sneak in such a superb snake write.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I agree!! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Many thanks you're all too kind "Squirrels must adore you." "Why?" "Because you're @$*#@% NUTS!" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Raffaele, this is an intense shot of truth! Abbracci Margherita |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 An astute observation in a few words, Raph. Myself, I just had to quit going there. (and yep, I think you know what I mean) |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
WOW -- made me think of politicians and the talking heads on the news! |
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