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Marshalzu
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0 posted 2004-05-22 09:07 AM


Empty.

Silence, dear silence
draped upon the empty room
uncomfortably I undress
and whistle.

Hmm...

© Copyright 2004 Andrew Sewell - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-05-22 09:11 AM


Marshalzu,
Whistle, a favourable tune, LOL Enjoyed

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2 posted 2004-05-22 09:39 AM


A well crafted image.  It is part of a larger vision.  When you are able, perhaps you will shrae it.
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3 posted 2004-05-23 10:23 AM


Why....does "Whistle while you work" keep popping thru my mind?
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Susan
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4 posted 2004-05-23 11:51 AM


I liked this

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iliana
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5 posted 2004-05-23 12:15 PM


hmmmmmmmm -- very interestingly written!
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6 posted 2004-05-23 01:48 PM


neat write...I relate
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7 posted 2004-05-23 05:49 PM


Er.... I won't make a comment about you undressing.... great writing my dear
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