Open Poetry #32 |
Empty |
Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Empty. Silence, dear silence draped upon the empty room uncomfortably I undress and whistle. Hmm... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marshalzu, Whistle, a favourable tune, LOL Enjoyed |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
A well crafted image. It is part of a larger vision. When you are able, perhaps you will shrae it. |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Why....does "Whistle while you work" keep popping thru my mind? Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I liked this Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
hmmmmmmmm -- very interestingly written! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat write...I relate |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Er.... I won't make a comment about you undressing.... great writing my dear |
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