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timothysangel1973
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Never close enough

0 posted 2004-05-20 10:33 PM


Destiny or fate
would have us
on opposite sides
of the same idea.

You thinking it's time
to move on,
I beleiving that no
time is a good time
to say goodbye.

I suggest living
in silence,
just to be together
You're faithful to point out
that our lives
could be better.

I always hated the
reasoning side of you,
even though
that's what made me
fall in love
all those years ago.

Then, you were reasoning
for me
and not against...

Then, our opposites
attracted,
Now...they just
widen the gap.

Life is something that happens when you can't get to sleep.

Fran Lebowitz

© Copyright 2004 Tima Chavis Cooke - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2004-05-20 11:31 PM


yes so true
first its cute
then its redundant and enough

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-05-21 12:01 PM


A friend of mine and I were just discussing this a day or so ago.  Interesting to see it put into words.  Well written.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

GlisteningRain
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since 2004-05-06
Posts 103
The clouds
3 posted 2004-05-21 12:08 PM


Please enlighten me. I don't understand the female psychic kinetic energy. I don't want to fall into such a trap.
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-05-21 12:17 PM


Hi there, stranger! It is so good to see your pretty smiling face again. I had been wondering where you have been.

I am sure far too many of your readers will be able to identify with your words.

Sending you a love tonic!
Liqueur
Warm, welcome-back hugs!
EA

Endlessecho
Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398
I live within myself
5 posted 2004-05-21 12:20 PM


"Then, you were reasoning
for me
and not against..."

hmm... sad.  But, very real.  Wonderful write.

timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
6 posted 2004-05-21 12:23 PM


Thanks guys...
It's good to be back, Im knee deep in school, 3 kids (not counting the one kicking up a storm in my belly)

So... time is limited, but I will try hard to stay around this time!!

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2004-05-21 12:36 PM


Nice writing...sometimes, time runs out...James
passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-05-21 02:37 AM


you got it right
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