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Depth of Nothingness
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Depth of Nothingness |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful...love the presentation and theme here! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dawn~ The 'Libra' of me, loves the balance of this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The cusp of perfection is balance...well done. TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
So nice, Dawn... wish I was there~ M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfect balance... perfectly penned...by lovely you. Much enjoyed Dawn. ~Soft smiles, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
dixie: im so glad i could share with you, thank you  Marge: oh those huglets always make me smile, thank you for being here TD:for some strange reason, the word "cusp" you are using is making me think of tea cups! LOL...maybe its the close spelling...or maybe, we should be sharing a cup of tea  thank youMaureen: you are "there" sweetie, because i carry you in my heart  Enchantress: you are so generous...enough to make me blush...thank you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
such a wise lady for your age, your friends will be blessede in knowing you... Tremendous write. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Muted one -- what an amazing write and I admire the way you laid it out! ...jo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
"the equinox of the known and unknown and no fear of falling i'm in perfect balance" Amazing thoughts here Dawn love what you write and how you present them. Maree The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Dawn, What a beautiful and poised feeling this piece evokes. I can imagine you moving lightly and gracefully through this experience in complete equipose..... ~P |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
LeeJ: thank you, but i think im more blessed in having known them iliana:  you are amazing ya know?Dark Angel: oh, you know already, how much your comments me to me Choshi: i hope someday to attain what i have written here, but until then, thank you for watching me grow JamesMichael: i enjoy you as well! thank you for all your visits to my poetry |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dawn This place of peace and your words, beautiful. |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Choshi: i hope someday to attain what i have written here, but until then, thank you for watching me grow It is a sheer joy..... |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
 Well written buddy  i am enjoying your work sooo much. |
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