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The depth of a Woman
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The depth of a Woman |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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The depth of a woman Look at me What do you see Beneath this veil of skin? Do you find truth In depth and root Or merely surface thin? I can be Simply what you see Outside this veil of skin But you’ll never know What lies below If you fail to look within More than this Than briefest kiss Than rosy lips aglow Than pooled blue eyes And killer thighs And rings upon my toes I am mind Intellect you’ll find Heart and soul in motion I am strength And loving grace I am as vast as the ocean Open your eyes And see what lies Beneath this veil of skin Delve deep below And come to know Let the truth of me ascend S.A.T. The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write! Yes..there is SO much more to a woman. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
That depth is the only thing that counts. It is the source and destination of beauty. The rest is either pretty or not, and doesn't matter much either way. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Beneath this veil of skin Delve deep below And come to know Let the truth of me ascend yes yes if they cant accept the thorns too, with the beauty, and belive me sister poet, im full of them, then off they go........ |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
"Open your eyes And see what lies Beneath this veil of skin Delve deep below And come to know Let the truth of me ascend"  How true those words are. Beautifully written  |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Well said! and beautifully expressed. I love the descriptions. |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
Like a future love I'd hope to have. Exactly...how she'd see herself. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan, you are woman and I can hear you roar! This is a marvellous write!!! The inner you surely ascends through this poem of depth, truth and distinction!  Giving you a high-five! Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe most men look into the depth of a woman if they are desiring an enduring relationship...James |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
hell yeah! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write!!! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
exactly ... how many do look within to the heart and soul Hope |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you all. It seems we are all so over exposed to the media's idea of beauty. I know that men of depth, which most are, see the depth in a woman. I just wish, for the sake of our young women, that they knew that. Smiles -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I am mind Intellect you’ll find Heart and soul in motion I am strength And loving grace I am as vast as the ocean Open your eyes And see what lies Beneath this veil of skin Delve deep below And come to know Let the truth of me ascend How very, very beautiful! *S* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan -- Great affirmation! |
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