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The Next Step
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The Next Step |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys 
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The Next Step -To Kieran, for graduation. Into the unknown the journey begins Blackness on all sides, confusion- Which way does the wind blow, I’ll follow it. I am, I am, I am That child lost without his mothers Hand to guide him through the dark Night. Remember all the nights We lost our way only to be found By the sun as it peeked across the Horizon. Remember that one night Where you found me. Bleeding on The bathroom floor, wanting to be Lost forever. But you found me. You made sure I would never be Lost again. And so we close this chapter- And I can’t help but think our story ends here. And I can’t help it, but I know, our story ends here. "So what befalls the flawless? |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This is sad, but content, too. Knowing that you were there for eachother when you needed to be... and now you can both move on. I just hope that moving on isn't as hard as I know it can be. Excellent expression of this. I wish you and your friend well! Always, Alyssa Poems are made by fools like me, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
changes...endings...beginnings... life is funny like that |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
This was just so nicely flowing.. I loved the line breaks. The emotion was there. Molodious. I really liked this. |
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