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Initiates Of Silver Sound
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Initiates Of Silver Sound |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Reunion draped upon the sand Sparkling rise and churns as ribbons band So long away and gone The tied of hearts abandoned Crest in tendering a lilting song Arise from sight once lost As waves in crystal frost And far beyond the shore Their pleasures moor Swirl of bodies tangled In the curl of surfs adore On and on the rolling builds In slow and steady rhythm fills A swim in consecrated rain So scintillates a wild terrain Of undertow and graceful wane Usurped of roles against the shoals Bent back in contoured writhe of souls The first of time in meter mime The tide with no request denied To sure these lovers glide Copyright Kkh 5/19/04 |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Very well written. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
this danced off my tongue! very very nice  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was simply beautiful TD!  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
TD -- I was just going to log off when I saw this one -- had to stop by since your poetry always warms me. This was no exception, it's really lovely!  ....jo |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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