Open Poetry #32 |
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Delila's Offering |
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IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time ![]() |
Oh, the roses - - Indeed in shades of peculiar whites and rampantly misused nirvana, we humble our lies to confuse a society of treason whilst murmuring Oh, the roses - - O'er a sky bloodstained and disconsoled, maybe then the prayers will answer their own paintbrush, steel bristles broken over salty skin and tastes of dew like brackish water, only one tone sweeter than adagio do you or do you not push for elegies, from the lips of innocence ...? Oh, the roses - - but how could one thorn inside my palm change an entire patience throwing away what is meaningful, keep eternity in a small paper bag with coffee beans, and petals swinging lost their velvet oh, the roses shivering silvering the blueness mistaking scarlet's vast impure an antique Palestine If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, the poem! Magnificent! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My goodness but you're talented! I enjoyed your indigo imaginings immeasurably! Love & Light, EA |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Excellent. Smiles -- Susan The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
fantastic |
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