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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
It’s the end of day Sitting in café Hear them twittering Pair of finches flittering Branch to branch to ground Makes a joyful sound In search for small crumbs When diners are done It’s the end of meal Sunset bring a chill Two young girls meeting In garden greeting Makes a joyful sound Hug and then sit down Hear them twittering Young eyes glittering Gloom |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Professor, Enjoyed the mood in this! Liked your meter and rhyme. Great, as I've come to expect! Sadie |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sharing your thoughts brings a smile to an overcast morning~ MM |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Sadelite I do tend to use meter and rhyme, Although some tend to think of it as unneeded to poetry I think of it as an integral part Pleased you enjoyed. Thank you, nakdthoughts, With a smile as bright as yours I am sure you will burn off the clouds soon enough, A pleasure to share with you Gloom |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I've heard those bird talking! Enjoyed sitting there in this scene!  ....jo |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very scenic. Great one. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful picture taken and shared |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wait... Where are we? I thought we were in the mountains?  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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