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Each Foot ZZ9 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
This tired old foot Placed just before the other Leads to journey’s end That tired old foot Steps closer than its brother To the journey’s end The great mountains loom Growing larger each step each day Summer will end soon Arriving in Autumn To start a different way To where each foot comes. Gloom |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor It's true we never know which foot will get there first. LOL Enjoyed. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Prof.....I agree with "Sigh"....hell, there are alot of times...(Usually on Friday and Saturday nights), that I have to think about which foot goes next...and it doesn't always work well?...I remember one time getting pulled over by the law, many years ago, told me to walk this little white line, I told him I didn't know if I could but if he'd roll up a dollar bill I could probably snort that sucker, he didn't have the slightest bit of sense of humor.....this is a fine write gloom... |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Professor, I liked the way you kept a nice slow meter and your word choice. Always a pleasure to read your poetry (Gee, I hope this is not the end of the Zs! He is a perfect fit for you and your wandering and observing eye. Matter-of-fact, I had wondered if someday you would put these in a book. That tired old foot Steps closer than its brother To the journey’s end |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Seymour, I suppose it really doesn’t matter The end will eventually get there for boot feet Thank you, Toerag, I have had a few meetings with the police, But each time have found them professional if somewhat humorless. I hope you have fewer encounters nowadays Pleased you enjoyed Thank you, Sadelite I will have several more in the series, I am sure, As for a book, I doubt if it would be viable enough to be done. Glad you are enjoying Gloom |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
You're welcome Gloom, yea I behave now-a-days....and, they were professional, just humorless?...Of course, if I had to deal with people like me day in and day out, I'd lose my sense of humor pretty quickly too... |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Toerag, I think I speak for most in the hope that You never lose your sense of humor Gloom |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I am really enjoying this series |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Gloomy Guy, I am walking along with these and it's a nice journey!  ...jo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Gloomyone~ I didn't forget about these...just busy for a bit... one foot in tune with the other... please don't use the word "end"...not just yet.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Professor, not only did I enjoy the senryus, but the repartee in between, as well. One could say you are even a bit chatty...  ...and on you, it brings a smile. |
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