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Missing You
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Missing You |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania 
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Missing You It crept up on me, sitting in a crowd Your laugh wasn't there for my silly jokes Your arm wasn't there to steady me after one too many You weren't finishing my thoughts You weren't the one to tell me I did it again It hit me hard, stung deep Your smile is in my minds eye Your voice my cricket of thought Such a part of me you became I miss you, and all that you are I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike [This message has been edited by Michelle_loves_Mike (05-18-2004 08:49 AM).] |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
I'm sure you'll see him again, real soon.... Great Write Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again... http://www.cmlb.net/ringo |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
bittersweet  |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
MIchelle_Loves_Mike signs of a broken heart however, consider the last line being .... I miss you, and all that we were! Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all. pictureme :-) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sorry to hear this. Nice write.  |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Thank you all for your lovely words, as for loving and losing,,,,,,,yeah, I love this guy, he's my best friend, lol, and since my move, not seeing him to do the silly things friends can do, w/o much reproach (lol),has been weighing on my mind....hes one of a kind, and I am a very lucky woman to have him in my life,,,,,,, I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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