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Margherita
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0 posted 2004-05-15 09:20 PM





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Immensity calls


Solitude tricks me
into the illusion
of extreme fragility
and I shrink
to a defenseless dimension,
totally unconscious
of my true self,
forgetting who I am.

Stars twinkle
and shine bright
baring my invisible skin
to the reaching night.
In the precious safety
of this nocturnal majesty
I listen to immensity
calling me by my name.

It’s your sweet voice
I hear crystal clear.
You sing to me softly
through sacred silence.
I follow your invitation
and I lift my head
feeling your strength
flowing through my bones
helping me so tenderly
to stretch and to expand
back into my real height.

As One we open up
to the infinite Universe,
cloaking ourselves
in its huge blue blanket
sparkling like diamonds.
All the heavy weight
of painful solitude
recedes in deference
to the laws of love.

Truth unfolds before
our searching eyes.
Together we absorb
the message conveyed
in a holy manifestation
of the eternal realms,
carved indelibly
and in brightest colors
on the canvas of our souls.

Perception of separateness
is a mere illusion.
Love is the ultimate truth.
You pointed to the stars
and revelation dawned
deep within my heart.
Divine Oneness
is our authentic reality.
To know without any doubt
that we are One, you and me,
we just need to listen
to the Call of Immensity.


*

Love, Margherita

© Copyright 2004 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-05-15 09:29 PM


Margherita~
What an immense pleasure to read such beauty~
You reach out and touch me with your thoughts~

Hey lady !  Congratulations on the 4000th post !
Each posted poem a treasure ...
each reply to others a thoughtful gesture of sincerity~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2004-05-15 09:53 PM


Loved this Marguerita:
Congratulations on your milestone.
Hugs,
TD

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2004-05-15 10:05 PM


just breathtakingly beauitful
Susan
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4 posted 2004-05-15 10:08 PM


This is incredibly beautiful and spiritual and touches my heart.  Thank you for sharing such a wonderful message.

Susan

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5 posted 2004-05-15 10:12 PM




Beautiful beautiful piece to mark this milestone.
Congratulations on your 4,000th post!!
~Smiles, Hugs & Cheers, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-05-16 04:20 AM


your words are so beautiful

and so are you

Sunshine
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7 posted 2004-05-16 07:05 AM


Margherita, you took a marvelous few words, and captured 4,000 rounds of applause.  Congratulations!
Patricia
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8 posted 2004-05-16 08:14 AM


What wisdoms...what insight!  Your words, I know, will stay in my mind and my heart.  You are using His gift to you in a most awesome way, my friend.

What a beautiful heart you have!

Patricia

Ericc
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9 posted 2004-05-16 09:15 AM


Beautiful writing...as if from pen to heart....there is no seperation.

Love,
Eric

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10 posted 2004-05-16 09:23 AM


Margherita, this piece of spiritual, loving and expansive poetry, is you at your best! ~ and that is really saying something because everything that you write is stellar. As you must surely know by now, I am one of your biggest fans! I adore your poetry, your spirit, and the person that you are!

Congratulations on reaching this milestone ~ and continue to reach for those stars!


Linda

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11 posted 2004-05-16 09:32 AM


Margherita
Good thoughts, good write, good read.

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12 posted 2004-05-16 10:28 AM


beautiful poem, beautiful poetess...



~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

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13 posted 2004-05-16 10:46 AM


oh WOW, that was soooooo goooood!!
you keeping outdoing yourself

Margherita
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14 posted 2004-05-16 12:59 PM


Beautiful and dear poets, I bow my head in gratitude for the loving expressions of your appreciation.
Smiles, love and hugs. Margherita

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15 posted 2004-05-16 10:29 PM


Enjoyed...James
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16 posted 2004-05-17 04:19 AM


i agree with all here, beautiful just as you


Margherita
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17 posted 2004-05-17 12:42 PM


Thank you dear James and Marsha, for stopping by and commenting so kindly!
Love, Margherita

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18 posted 2004-05-17 10:57 PM


Absolutely lovely, and I am glad I found this poem marking your milestone.  Congratulations to you on your 4,000th posting as well.

Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains.

Sadelite
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19 posted 2004-05-17 11:06 PM


Incredibly beautiful writing.   I relate to this well.  Margherita, thanks for posting this wonderful gift...
             Sadie

Margherita
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20 posted 2004-05-18 09:21 AM


Thank you dear Sharon and Sadie for your loving comments. You warm my heart.
Love and hugs. Margherita

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