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Poetic Declaration
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Poetic Declaration |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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It would seem that I had this inclination to write a sort of poetic declaration. I asked my muse to vist, if she was so inclined but she so chose to graciously decline. With my thoughts then away she ran but I can still write...I think I can.... My muse was determined that I wouldn't write, Ah! She knows me better, I just had to fight! Through the words I painfully muddled she laughed at me, but onward I struggled. I reached through my heart, straight into my soul {you see, she thought she had taken complete control!} Each time she'd steal a thought and try to run away another new word eased through to come into play. She was tough, there was surely no doubt, but she needed to learn what I was all about! We battled ferociously throughout at times while she tried to steal my well thought out rhymes! NO, I would not give up, nor would I give in. This time wasn't hers, I was going to win.... So I now present this as my final assertation~ I've still written my poetic declaration!! (c) dmsmith 08-06-02 (revised repost.) It's better than I could have planned.. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write. Your thoughts are working just fine. Great read. Really enjoyed this one. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Even when the muse doesn't amuse... a repost is always apropos! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ Well, I do so declare that little vixen, an eyelash didn't bat She didn't know she was battling wits with a pro You showed her where it's at !! A DELIGHTFUL penning~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Been there, experienced that. Fun write. Susan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Delightful Donna! Love this one! Hugs sweet lady~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Good one, I liked this one whole bunches. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ah, the Lady doth protest poetically well! It's good to know that whenever our muse abandons us, we can still manage to fight through our mental cobwebs and come up with something rather decent all on our own! ~ But please don't tell my muse that I said so! lol Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I think the muse will reward you for this poetic declaration. You "played" your words so well. Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Adored this! I know the feeling, too! |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Cute write, reminded me of when I struggle with a well educated mind and a passionate heart. Sometimes they never agree. As far as my muse.......we play hide and seek! pictureme :-) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
we've all been there...I'm there now, but I know I'll come up with something sooner or later |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
My muse is still on vacation I am sorry to say, but thanks for leaving your thoughts to brighten my day! Hugs and peace to all.... |
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